Alliteration: 'whinge and whine' - emphasises what she feels like, unhappiness
Rhetorical Q: 'when have I ever asked you to?' - exasperation
Repeated use of commas: 'Couldn't you, for an hour or so, just leave them out of this?' - impatience, questioning their relationship.
Caesura: 'Yes, I'm aware...' - separation/break in their relationship.
Hyperbole: '...tortured, wounded...' - exaggerates his state and his feelings which are unknown to the reader.
Tricolon: 'passion, thrills and fun' - selfishness, outgoing, she committs adultery to achieve this.
Ambiguity: 'so what are we doing here?' - worn out/given up, feels isolated.
Colloqialism: '**** at it' - extent of her anger, she is fed up.
Repetition: 'stupid, stupid git' - anger emphasised.
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