'An Easy Passage' - by Julia Copus (about the auth
grew up in London
her poems are often subtly and elaborately structured
she grew up with three brothers and craved her own space
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The poem
the poem explores the shift from childhood to adulthood
in light of this explaination- the title seems ironic
the theme of this poem is universal
the poem is about a girl sneaking into her house
this is something she clearly is not meant to be doing
the poem is not written in verses but as one continous flow
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Lines 1-9
'Once she is is halfway up there, crouched in her bikini...'
past event , she is vunerable , she is 'halfway' between childhood and adulthood
'on the porch roof of her family's house, trembling,'- her state of mind - she is frightened/ in
she is in fear of falling
'the sharp drop of the stairwell; she must keep her mind' - building up willpower to jump
'on the friend with whom she is half in love' - innocence of youth/ purity
repetition of 'keep in mind'
she is being supported by her friend
'and on the fact of the open window,' - reader learns of girl's intention
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Line 10-17
'the flimsy,hole-punched , aluminium lever'- sense of fragility
'towards which in a moment she will reach'- suggesting she is getting to old for this
'but first she steadies herself,' - growing courage
'the grains of the asphalt'- sandy black grains
'hot beneath her toes and fingertips'- a warm day
'a square of petrified beach' - she is disobeying her parents
'her tiny breasts rest lightly on her thighs.' - puberty
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Lines 17 +
'What can she know ( new line) of the way the world admits us less and less the more we grow?' - naivety
present tense
'For now both girls seems lit, as if from within,'- radiance of youth
'for now the house exists only for them, set back as it is '- they have no perspective of the world at large
they are unaware or oblivious ot the wider world
'from the long ,grey eyw of the street'- the watchful eye
'the mother ( next line) who does not trust her daughter with the key' - not considered ready for responsibility so has sneaked out
'the workers about their business in the drab' - work is something the girls have never done - they are freedom
drab'- refers to boredoom
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lines 26 -32
'far too, most far , from the flush -faced secretary'- alliteration - this is the girl's future
'who,with her head full of the evening class (next line) she plans to take or the trip of a lifetime,'- she has no time for fun - busy stressed out adult- focusing on task/concentrating
'looks up now from the stirring omens of the astrology column'- sinister / onimous
'at a girl -thirteen if she's a day'- age of girl/ v. young -rebellion
'in next to nothing in the driveway opposite,' - use of other person's perspective by poet
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33-38
'shielding her eyes to gaze up at a pale calf,'- shiny /brightness - girl is breaking in
an adult would never do this
'a silver anklet'- something of value
'the five neat shimmering -oyster -painted toenails'- fashion -type of nail polish
'of an outstreached foot' - smoothness of movement
enjambment -'which catch the sunlifght briefly'- sunlight suggest positive memory when everything seemed great
'like a flash of armaments' - simile - weaponary - armour attack
flash of potential
this is an unsual choice of words, there is a hint of menance here
'before (next line ) dropping gracefully into the shade of the house'- she has achieved what she set out to do
shows she is not ready for responsibility as she did a dangerous thing
she is falling in line / acquiescing
- breaking in not out of her house
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Structure/ summary of poem's ending
Structure
enjamebent -constant continous flow -reflects women writers thoughts at time
the enjamebent leads to a conversational glow
Summary
the girls situation is delicate
the writer has used physicality of the girls fragility
the writer has used dark/light imagery throughout the poem
the poem is about the girl's evental descent into the gray adult world around her
but the use of 'armaments' towards the end of the poem -feistness -might meant the girl will 'fight' the future that has been mapped out for her
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