- Created by: GreenGooSnake
- Created on: 30-07-19 16:09
Golden Rule for Paragraphs.
Start a new paragraph every time something changes.
When you talk about a New Person.
Tanya looked at the scene in despair. She couldn't believe that eight soldiers could make such a mess. She sighed and started to pick up the biscuits and crisps.
A friendly face popped round the door. It was Brian. He watched Tanya grovelling…