Using and Linking Paragraphs Part 2.
- Created by: GreenGooSnake
- Created on: 30-07-19 17:35
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A new paragraph for a New Place...
The shopping mall was deserted. The guards scratched their heads. Where was everybody?
Outside Bernie's gourmet chip shop in the High Street it was a rather different story. The crowd was all pushing and shoving to get to the door: "Give us battered rat!" they cried. "Give us rat on a stick!".
- The story has moved to the chip shop, so this is a new paragraph.
...or for a Different Time.
At last it was over. The voice called out again, "Are you alright?" I barely had the strength to answer. I was giddy with relief. Soon I would be…
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