Using and Linking Paragraphs Part 2.


A new paragraph for a New Place...

The shopping mall was deserted. The guards scratched their heads. Where was everybody?

Outside Bernie's gourmet chip shop in the High Street it was a rather different story. The crowd was all pushing and shoving to get to the door: "Give us battered rat!" they cried. "Give us rat on a stick!".

  • The story has moved to the chip shop, so this is a new paragraph.

...or for a Different Time.

At last it was over. The voice called out again, "Are you alright?" I barely had the strength to answer. I was giddy with relief. Soon I would be


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