*structure
3 lines -distance except last which is a couplet shows reunion
7 stanzas
Irregular tercets shows memory
Slightly cyclical start and end near lake but difference
*title
Cold= end
Mate for life
Elegant, love, migrate, but can be aggressive
*contempoary poem, welsh poet. From collection of skirrid hill meaning shattered mountain. Use of natural imagery and modern view on relationships
‘Water logger earth’
Skirted the lake
Silent and apart
Gasping for air at our feet
Two days of rain
Tipping in unison
Stilling water
Pair of wings
Settling
Rolling weights down their backs to their heads
Halves themselves in the dark
Like boats righting in rough weather
They mate for life
Swim the distance between us
In the lakes shingle
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