English Poetry
Brief notes on poems
- Created by: Gemma Flaxman
- Created on: 20-03-12 09:37
The Ruined Maid By Thomas Hardy
- Amelia says a lot less than the Country girl (one line at end of each stanza) - suggests she is ashamed
- Repeating the word "ruined" suggests she is undermining what the Country girl says
- Amelia isn't particularly happy about what she does but she sees the benefits
- Hardy's voice comes through Amelia's lines about being "ruined"
- Amelia uses standard English in her speech
- One lapse suggests she hasn't changed as much as we expect
Meaning:
- Poet offers no commendation of Amelia - derived from Latin "melior" which means better
Structure:
- Two characters speak for themselves
- Country girl speaks excitedly/ Amelia speaks simple, ironic
The River God By Stevie Smith
Language:
- "God" - Omniscient/ all powerful/ can control death
- "bless their swimming" - honour
- "Spirit of Clowning" (cheerful) - contrast to most of the poem
- Simplistic quality like a Nursery rhyme - "Hi yih"
Imagery:
- Personification of the River
- Sense of power/ anger - "I can drown the fools"
Meaning:
- Warning/ eerie tone - Bad things can happen if you don't obey rules
Structure/ Form: - short and long to represent the waves of river
My Last Duchess By Robert Browning
Tone:
- Ominous/ eerie - "I gave commands; then all smiles stopped together"
- Unnerving - "The curtain I have drawn for you" - Possessive/ Paranoid/ Dark
Structure:
- Not many full stops - shows lots of emotion
- Well-thought out speech but rambles - suggesting madness
Language:
- Manipulative language - "The faint half-flush that dies along her throat"
- Conversational language (fillers) - "How shall I say?"
Form:
- Rhyming couplets used in romantic poetry & One long paragraph like a story
The Clown Punk By Simon Armitage
- Poem is written as a sonnet (14 lines, traditionally written in iambic pentameter)
- Iambic Pentameter - 10 syllables per line, alternately unstressed and stressed
- Two lines (6 and 7), not in iambic pentameter- Life doesn't have a regular pattern
- The title "Clown Punk" sounds derogatory
- Style of a dramatic monologue
- Critical/ Labelling tone
- "town clown" suggests a local figure
- Iambic pentameter mimics conversational tone
- Enjambments to add narrative.
- Idea of being an outcast
Ozymandias By Percy Bysshe Shelley
- Dramatic Monologue
- Ozymandias, another name for Ramses II, Egyptian Pharoah (Ramses the Great)
- Moral: People who once had great power, no-one will remember later on
- Metaphorical ideas: Once a great King who now has nothing to boast about
- Metaphor for destructive power of history has destroyed his "works"
- Insignificance of human time on Earth
- Poem symbolises pride of humanity
- Art and language outlive any form or power of human life
- Distancing the history and time
Main Metaphor is about ephemeral power of Political Power (short-lived power)
Brendon Gallacher By Jackie Kay
- Brendon's life seems more interesting and exciting than the speaker's life
- Speaker wants to change her dad's job, wants friends and companionship
- Speaker wants to get away from where she lives/ go on holiday
- Mum shatters fantasy, Brendon "dies"
- Feminine endings make the poem seem softer and more nostalgic
- Half rhyme used - no full rhyme at all
- Sintactic Patterning
- No punctuation in some places , seems childish
- A lot of simplistic/ childish language - emphasises childhood memories
- Written in past tense
- Brendon represents a means of escape and friendship (He is a strong friend, the speaker escapes with)
The Hunchback in the Park By Dylan Thomas
Imagery:
- Lots of contrasts are created (idea of fantasy vs reality) - Imagination is very important (no bitter ideas)
- Two different Worlds and times - Solitary/ Alone
- Dylan's voice presented through the use of "I" - experience is his own
- Treated no better than an animal
- "Hunchback" - Physically deformed
Structure:
- Six lines in each stanza and same line lengths
- Show how rigid Hunchback's daily routine is - Confinement of reality and World he lives in
- Enjambments suggest freedom in his imagination
- Nature theme runs throughout poem - suggests beauty
On a Portrait of a Deaf Man By John Betjeman
- Poem speaks well and positively of the deaf man, makes readers more sympathetic
- Tense contrasts to compare what he was like then and now
- End stop lines create short sentences to create a big impact
Themes and Ideas:
- Uses a ballad metre as this is a elegy(4 line stanzas of alternating iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter)
- The jaunty metre and rhyme scheme jars somewhat with the content and theme
Language, Structure and Form:
- Matter of fact tone
- Repeats past and present tense contrasts to reinforce the conflict being explored, as the poet comes to terms with the finality of death
- Uncomplicated, straight forward language to create a pleasant picture.
Casehistory: Alison (head injury)
- Talks of then (third person) and now (first person)
- The use of caesuras show how her previous life stopped suddenly
- Third person use emphasises how she doesn't remember her previous self
Themes and Ideas:
- Dramatic Monologue to explore effects of memory loss and how it affects personal identity
- Tone of regret and pathos as Alison mixes personal pronouns demonstrating her confusion and sense of loss
Structure, Form and Language:
- Balanced and regular structure
- Arranged in tercets (three lined verse)
- Creates a tone of quiet consideration
Medusa By Carol Ann Duffy
Voice:
- Medusa (how she's different/ changed)
- Dramatic Monologue - character central to the action tells us the story
Ryhme, rhythm and structure:
- Only full ryhme used in stanza 3
- Uses rhyme within the line
Themes and Ideas:
- Metaphor for pain and passion of relationships (danger and violence when love goes wrong)
Language, Structure and Form:
- Tone is quite bitter
- Negative language used to reinforce pathos of Medusa's self image
Les Grands Seigneurs By Dorothy Molloy
- Able to talk and spend time with any men until she becomes married (only allowed to talk to her husband)
- "we played at" - suggests innoncence of what they are doing
- "I was wedded" - passive tense, suggests husband has taken her power
- Lots of possessive pronouns highlight the sense of power she once had
- Loss of possessive pronouns after marriage highlighting her loss of power
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