Climbing my grandfather

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Language

By andrew waterhouse 

Waterhouse uses extended metaphors when he compares grandfather to mountain "climbing my grandfather"

imposing a figure in memory 

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simile

Compares grandfathers skin to 'ice'but this is 'warm ice' a puzzling contradiction also known as a paradox suggests its imposible to put words into the exact feelings that memory gives 

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Structure

Not divided into stanzas with no obvious rhyme scheme as poem presented as one continuos piece may link to ideas of imposing a mountain waiting to be climbed Tone is also gentle throughout 

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Enjambment

often in poem to make transitions from one stage to the next of a continual journey "i change.....direction"

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Form

A narrative verse 

present tense and first person throughout "i decieded to do it free,"

however the speaker is refering to past but finding it hard to remeber a  figure from long ago 

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Metaphor

"glassy ridge"

metaphor when the comparison is between a scar and the grandfather this links to natural features 

which consequently puts focus on the man and shows how the speaker is enjoying remebering him 

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Comments

Benny Ewing

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Love it! but maybe just a little more analysis of other parts of the poem

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