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Naeem

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Bowties_Are_Cool

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This is not helpful at all... Made no sense....

Laura

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i thought this was very helpful, thankyou

Abayomiolorunkoje-Osayimwense

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Hard!!

Molly

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Hi,

This was quite difficult to read, and once you could read it (after changing the colours), it made no sense at all! You basically just explained what the question meant, rather than gave us tips on what to do. Maybe use less colour and less sentences that waffle!

Armani_SuperStar<3

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Yeah, i agree with Molly. Maybe next time you should do an exampler essay??? You should actually try and explain what to do rather than just analyse and break down the question. Thanks for trying anyway...

tytyt fsdgg

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Its quite confusing although some helpful points can be found

pinkystar123

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it was helpful but a bit confusing