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kennyjcecil

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quite a good basic summary to start of with but in order to get the higher marks you will have to develop it more

I will rate it 2/5

kennyjcecil

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Quite a good basic summary to start of with but in order to get the higher marks you will have to develop it more

I will rate it 2/5

niamhmcnamara

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tragic grammar otherwise not bad