'Nationalism and liberalism are incompatible with multiculturalism'. Discuss

This is a commendable essay, dealing with a complex topic. Students will find it useful as an exemplar well-organised of knowledge and argument. In order to gain more credit in assessment objective 2, (evaluation and analysis), there need to be more examples or case studies to illustrate ideas such as 'multiple (cultural) identities within liberal democracies such as the UK.