Colons and semi colons - shows he has used a fact to work out a situation. eg. "The television was on; that meant ma and da weren't in bed." - working out - shows maturity / youth as facts are withheld
Pathetic fallacy eg. "It was cold." - when a situation is mirrored in weather / surroundings. In this example, shows tention between family
Juxtaposition - when a long sentence is followed by a short one (vise versa). This can show pace / confusion / listening and waiting.
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