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The Sun Rising – John Donne

Introduction:

Metaphysical poetry essentially explores certain aspects of life which are beyond the physical realm of mankind. The Sun Rising by metaphysical poet John Donne, written in the late Elizabethan era, is an aubade poem set in the speaker's bedroom, where he and his lover lay in bed presumably after a night of passion. The poem is a celebration of their love through the metaphysical conceit carried in the form of the sun. The sun is anthropomorphised and seen as an unwanted dawn intruder, invading the lover’s solitude, and is initially insulted before being challenged.

Historical Context: The late Elizabethan era (Renascence), was also an era of emerging exploration, which justifies the several mentions of astronomy and travel. Several areas of the author’s life is covered in this poem

  • -Raised Roman catholic
  • -Had a promising political career by using his inheritance to travel across Europe. (cut short when he fell in love with Anne More à secretly married her à got caught and sent to prison but released when the marriage was proven valid).
  • -John eventually became a cleric in the church of England.
  • -John and Anne bore 12 children, the last which was a stillborn that also took the life of Anne More.

Records suggest that Donne loved his wife deeply and it makes sense to think of her as the female recipient of this poem, as reference to time spent together before marriage was discovered that the reason the sun rising is such a dismaying realization is because it means their time together is ended, since they cannot be seen in public for fear of discovery.

Typical: Donne wrote many amorous poems, using conceits to explore in depth the relationship between himself, the cosmos and love. What is typical of John Donne’s poetry is that he uses argumentation and reasoning to balance out passion combined with thought, which acts as proof that the sun has no power over the lovers. Although conversational, the tone of the poem is intellectual, there lies planet of complexity in his use of conceits and allusions.

Atypical: It explores this idea of love as being eternal, instead of love as being fickle and mutable which is seen in his other poems ‘The flea’ and ‘Woman’s constancy’. Instead of addressing the female passive recipient through a one-sided dialogue filled with rhetorical interrogatives, he instead addresses the sun, idolising the lover’s relationship.

Language Stanza 1:
  • Anthropomorphises sun in apostrophes through the use of pejorative language - colloquial, bemoaning tone challenging authority - 'Busy old fool, unruly sun', 'saucy pedantic wretch' (plosives to address patronizing tone)
  • Uses rhetorical interrogatives to declare that love isn't subject to the everyday routines, and is certainly no slave to time thus challenging the sun. Line 9-10: Explores theme that love is eternal and transcendent (metaphysical property).
  • List of secular citizens for the sun to 'go chide' - 'late schoolboys' 'court-huntsmen' 'king' - dismissal of society àenumerating prime functions of the sun in our physical realm that occurs simultaneously and is used to create chaotic imagery of life occurring all around mankind.
  • -Use of imperatives; Go and Call – effect: Commands Sun to do it’s job, addressing him as inferior to him and his lover, indicating hierarchy.
Stanza 2:
  • Ocular imagery - empowers lover above sun which speaker undermines 'Thy beams...eclipse and cloud them with a wink' but 'not lose sight of her so long if her eyes have not blinded thine' - hyperbolic blinding through beauty, followed by sense of irony that her eyes will blind the sun.
  • -Consistent in finding different forms of argumentation to place his lover on a pedal stool, taking a humanist approach.
  • -Explores references to astronomy and renascence which allude to the era, empowering the female form as being eternally beautiful, instead of using it as an object of ridicule which is seen in his poems a Woman’s constancy and Flea.
  • Wealthy/exotic imagery - 'the'Indias of spice' - disregards as 'alchemy(S3)' compared to richness of love
  • Raises massive metaphysical ideas about human love and its hierarchal position in the cosmos.
Stanza 3:
  • 'Conceit/microcosmic paradox of lovers' comprising the entire world - 'She'is all states, and all princes I' with assertive declarative, commas slow down pace
  • 'Nothing else is.(structure)' – uses a calming rhythm through elongated vowels to address a big statement that nothing else matters other than this moment with his lover.
  • ‘all honour’s mimic, all wealth alchemy’ – explores topics of law, monetary system, pale shadow pretend chemistry; all things that lead to questioning the uncertainty in this world, but then there is the eternal nature of love as the centre of the universe, the only item of certainty in our physical realm yet to exit as a timeless force.
  • ‘World’s contracted thus’ further disempowers the sun. à universe is a gift of love from God
  • conclusion 'This bed thy centre is, these walls, thy sphere'; his lover is the centre of the universe not the sun; human love is the centre and fundamental bedrock of reality.
Structure
  • Contradictory development of thought - begins dismissing sun, ends demanding sun shines only on lovers - imperative 'Shine here to us'
  • Irregular rhythm/metre + ABBACDDEE rhyme - iambic pentameter and rhyming couplet ending each stanza results in earnest and assertive tone
  • Quatrain ends with rhyming couplet of a consistent conclusion
  • Frequent use of caesura to address sun 'Busy old fool...' 'Thou, sun' - colloquial aggressive condescending effect
  • End-stopped and short declarative 'Nothing else is' - (overly?) assertive
Form
  • Aubade - morning poem - freshness of love
  • Metaphysical features:
  • Colloquial language
  • Contemporary references
  • Developing argument
  • Use of paradox
  • Caustic humour
Context
  • Age of Discovery - 1492 Columbus America discovery - West & East trade in valuable commodities e.g. spices
  • Ptolemaic v Heliocentric (Copernicus) theory - positioning of sun/solar system
  • Isolation in Surrey home with Ann after Sir Moore's discovery of illegitimate marriage - end of secular ambitions - letter to Ann 'John-Donne, Ann-Donne, Un-done'
Alternative interpretations
  • John Carey - 'irascibly conscious of the rest of the world going about its business' 'an expression of insecurity'
  • Rummens: 'must be one of the most joyous love poems ever written'
  • 'She's all states...' - objectification of women; feminist interpretation of sexism