Comprehension Test 6
Charlie Small and The Flooding Tsunami
This is a story about Charlie Small, who has just been alive from a tsunami, but his friends are been drowned by the tsunami.
As the tsunami rose to the high position, I screamed nervously ; how did the tsunami come, only finding out of there isn't an earthquake. Surely this disasterous monsters hadn't got on my way, right?
" Aargh! " I screamed.
" Charlie, run! " my best friend, Jakeman shouted.
Joseph Craik ( who was my arch enemy ) stood there, looking bloodied, as his face was like the core of the Earth. He couldn't run because of eating the bio weapon : it had deadly germs, viruses and microbes in it.
At the tsunami rose up to the ground, me and Jakeman ran up to my house, tall like Big Ben. Suddenly, I saw that the pole came flying to Craik and stabbed him, only to be left alive. He took of the jagged pole and drowned, yet alive.
Sadly, I saw my unsurpassed friends, drowning and dying because of the raging tsunami. Then, they were about to be buried at the church graveyard when I saw many relatives, singing song of the dead. Then, I saw my grandma, crying and seeing my friends.
" My grandson! " she cried.
" I'm your grandson! " I replied.
Later, me and Jakeman went to the graveyard and bow to our friends - they had forgotten all about us. When we were about to leave, I saw a strange figure, holding a gun, a bloodied blade and a gangster costume. I fainted, as I thought it was the evil Joseph Craik.
" Wake up! " the figure said.
It was Dad!
- Created by: AdithyaS
- Created on: 22-02-18 19:13
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