Creative Writing Example

Describe a place you think is beautiful. 

(24 marks for content and organisation

16 marks for technical accuracy)

[40 marks]

Plan: Calm semantic field, senses - sun, salt, crashing waves, icecream, sand, coral 

Start: on top of cliff peering down

Middle: describe details

End: bring back up to the cliff

The amazing, azure ocean ran further than my eye could see. Blue, indigo, teal, white: every type of blue was visible. Golden sand pristine as if it were untouched, lay bellowing for company. The white cliff face, turned grey with weathering, was covered in verdant moss abruptly cascaded below. Sun and sky, hand in hand, lit the sea and gave it a warm glow. 

Crashing against the shore, waves of all sizes washed the night's debris onto the land. Untouched golden sand covers the shore, way out into the distance. A gentle sea breeze slices through the air, giving a refreshing coolness to the otherwise…