Valentine- Poem
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- Created by: ninjaspar10
- Created on: 06-02-14 20:25
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- Valentine
- About
- Valentine's day
- The gift
- Onion
- Extended metaphor
- For relationship
- Irregular structure, becuase relationships are irregular. No 2 relationships are the same. No 2 onions are the same.
- Organisation
- 7 verses/stanzas
- 3 One sentence/line stanzas
- Every stanza has a 3 word line that is part of a larger sentence. Every verse explores ideas and explains
- 7 verses/stanzas
- Organisation
- Irregular structure, becuase relationships are irregular. No 2 relationships are the same. No 2 onions are the same.
- For relationship
- For relationship
- Irregular structure, becuase relationships are irregular. No 2 relationships are the same. No 2 onions are the same.
- Organisation
- 7 verses/stanzas
- 3 One sentence/line stanzas
- Every stanza has a 3 word line that is part of a larger sentence. Every verse explores ideas and explains
- 7 verses/stanzas
- Organisation
- Irregular structure, becuase relationships are irregular. No 2 relationships are the same. No 2 onions are the same.
- It's platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring
- True love is rare, like the precious metal platinum
- A marriage is a huge change
- If you like
- Techniques
- Metaphors
- Extended metaphor
- Extended metaphor
- Metaphors
- Takes edge off previous statement
- Adds unsure/not definite tone
- Techniques
- Layers of onion = layers of relationship
- Poem strips off layers as it goes until
- It's platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring
- True love is rare, like the precious metal platinum
- A marriage is a huge change
- If you like
- Techniques
- Metaphors
- Metaphors
- Takes edge off previous statement
- Adds unsure/not definite tone
- Techniques
- It's platinum loops shrink to a wedding ring
- The knife dissects the onion/relationship
- Poem strips off layers as it goes until
- Extended metaphor
- Onion
- The gift
- Valentine's day
- History/context
- Valentine's day
- Imagery
- Onion
- Layers of onion = layers of relationship
- Poem strips off layers as it goes until
- The knife dissects the onion/relationship
- Poem strips off layers as it goes until
- Layers of onion = layers of relationship
- Onion
- Personal response
- Message
- Love/relationships aren't simple/shallow
- 'Not a cute card on a kissogram'
- Love/relationships aren't simple/shallow
- Emotion
- While onion is unusual, still shows powerful emotion
- Fierce kiss will stay on your lips
- Still affected by relationship after they are over
- While onion is unusual, still shows powerful emotion
- Tone/atmosphere
- Negative start
- 'Not a red rose or a satin heart.'
- Negative start
- About
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