Transactional writing plan: “Children today lack imagination, are unfit and spend too much time indoors.”
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- Created on: 18-03-19 19:15
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- “Children today lack imagination, are unfit and spend too much time indoors.”
- Introduction
- Punchy, draw in
- E.g. 'We're sick of it, aren't we? Always being told...'
- Direct address, first person. Want to read on
- E.g. 'We're sick of it, aren't we? Always being told...'
- Punchy, draw in
- Point 1
- Forced to exercise etc. in school so no need to do others
- Statistics of how much PE is done
- Question if we need to do more (rhetoric. question)
- Statistics of how much PE is done
- Forced to exercise etc. in school so no need to do others
- Point 2
- In the evening, we aren't going to be out exercising so might as well chill
- Quote from someone who gets told to go out and exercise
- Quote provides validity - not just me
- Quote from someone who gets told to go out and exercise
- In the evening, we aren't going to be out exercising so might as well chill
- Point 3
- Counter point about unfit. Explain people who do well athletically and stay indoors
- Statistic. Rhetorical question (do you do that?). Humour?
- Counter point about unfit. Explain people who do well athletically and stay indoors
- Conclusion
- Draw together, definitive statement of opinion
- Opinion as fact, final convincing statement
- Draw together, definitive statement of opinion
- Point 4 / Slight counterpoint
- Child obesity levels. Disqualify argument with alternate response.
- Shows less bias. 'Some may say' shows considering other views, but also shows you ca n respond to them.
- Child obesity levels. Disqualify argument with alternate response.
- Introduction
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