'Remains by Armitage
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- Created on: 14-12-19 11:33
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- 'Remains' by Armitage
- Ideas about power and conflict
- A group of soldiers shoot dead a bank robber after the conflict in Iraq.
- The robber may not have been armed; the poem raises questions about the power that the group of soldiers (including the speaker) has.
- The speaker "remains" haunted by the death - the conflict has power over him.
- Context
- The speaker is a soldier who has served in Iraq
- After the conflict in Iraq, soldiers from Britain and America remained in the country.
- The soldiers had to act as a kind of police force to keep law and order.
- In the poem, people are raiding a bank; the speaker has to "tackle" them.
- Language
- The death is described in graphic detail, which explains why the soldier can't get it out of his head: "rips through his life", "sort of inside out", "tosses his guts"
- Imagery shows lasting effect on the speaker: "blood-shadow", "here in my head"
- The tone is chatty, conversationa-l: "well...", "i swear", "so we've..."
- Form
- A dramatic monologue: Armitage creates a voice for this soldier who tells a story.
- The last stanza breaks the pattern of quatrains (four line stanzas) - suggests the power of the the memory that "remains": "bloody life in my bloody hands"
- Starts off in first person plural ("we"); soon turns into "i" - sounds like a confession.
- Could be the soldier talking to a counsellor.
- Structure
- Starts as a casual anecdote, one of many stories: "on another occasion..."
- The fifth stanza is a turning point: "end of story, except not really." After this, the speaker reveals the memory that "remains" - it's traumatic, more than just a story.
- Repetition of "bloody" in the last line emphasises the guilt he feels.
- Caesura in line 20 before "but i blink" creates pause before the guilty memory.
- Quotations to learn
- "on another occasion"
- "end of story, except not really"
- "blood-shadow"
- "his bloody life in my bloody hands"
- Ideas about power and conflict
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