Nettles (1980)

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Written by Vernon Scannell 

  • 1922-2007 fought in 2 wars 
  • Deserted the army twice - arrested - Didn't like the horror of war
  • Two of his children predeceased him -darkness to his life

Language 

  • Emotive Language "with sobs and tears" make you feel sad as his little son is upset relates to his children predeceasing him
  • Personification/Extended Metaphor of the nettles "Regiment of spite" saying that they're like an army of soldiers, he is trying to protect his son from the world.
  • Sibilance - s sound "spears, seemed, son, spite, blisters" conveys harsher stronger emotions.

Structure

  • Cyclical rhyme scheme (abcdefag) goes back to rhyming with the first line in line13 like a

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