- Created by: GreenGooSnake
- Created on: 01-08-19 17:50
1. Something loads of people do i use "And" and "Then" too much, it makes it boring.
I went to the beach and I put on my trunks and I walked to the sea and the water was warm and I swam for an hour.
- Instead of using "and" all the time, try to use commas and full stops.
I went to the beach, put on my trunks and walked to the sea. The water was warm. I swam for an hour.
We went to the bank then we had a coffee and then we went back to the car. Then we drove to the supermarket…