Simile "silence between them like a thread to hold"-thread thin and can easily be broken but they choose no to break it - contentment?
Personification"chastitiy faces them" - the sad life result that they're not intimate anymore
Metaphor "time itself's a feather" time is soft and fragile and they're old and near death
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Context
Elizabeth Jennings
1926-2001 lived through 2 wars made her writing bleak
known for lyric poetry
Devout catholic
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Structure
Irregular rhyme scheme - unpredictability of relationship.
Pronouns - the use of "he/she" in stanza 1&2 which develops into "they" in stanza 3 - makes the reader think they're closer than they first seem to someone around.
Contrast - the contrast of the couple being together yet apart "strangely apart yet strangely close together" - this links to the theme of the Paradox of their love which is that they're not physically together but still in love
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Tone
Nostalgic - The tone has a sense of nostalgia as its constantly refering to their past "tossed up like flotsam from a former passion" suggests their excitement has faded like them. Now they're left with the cold wreckage that their past spark/fire has left.
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Themes
Christianity - The writer Jennings was a devout catholic and they're are several references to this in the poem, the title 'One Flesh' is a biblical reference of when two become one in marrage
Paradox - The whole poem is about the elderly couple, Jennings' parents, that have stayed together and supposedly love each other but arent intimate anymore - the idea that Sex ≠Love - Not physically together yet still one flesh.
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