This is Duffy’s first obvious assonant rhyme, with “drawl” rhyming with “paw”, and “jaw” rhyming perfectly with claw. Note also the consonant “clearing”, “reading” and “staining”. These rhyming devices create a tension and intensity after the gentle introduction.
The rapid repetition and rhyme suggests a child’s rhythmic nursery rhyme or playground song. The mood throughout suggests humour and mischief rather than serious danger. The use of rhyme is ironic, because the story of sexual awakening is anything but childlike.
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