In order to effectively desciribe you should -
Play on the senses, describe not only what the character see's but what they smell, hear, touch and taste.
DON'T BE BREIF! The aim is too describe so instead of just saying 'He opened the doors' add detail! 'His sweaty hands pushed against the cold glass and he took a deep breath. He pushed the wide door open, and without time to consider running, he was inside.'
Use linguistic techniques, you have been learning about them so actually use them now! Similes, metaphors, colluquialisms, visula imagery, syntax, onomatopoeia. ALL OF THEM will gain marks! Using an extended metaphor is sure to guarentee an A.
BE imaginative. Even if the question is dull you can do anything with it! 'Describe a journey by car' could be a kidnapping. They give you a lot of scope to make the answer interesting - you want to INTEREST the examiner.
PRACTICE. Right now, describe the room you are sat in, use all of the techniques above. I know its cliche but 'practice makes perfect!'
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