1) Waiting - expectation, quiet, still.
2) Race approaches - a build up of tension
3) midst of race- chaos =, noise, movement
4) Climax- end of race.
'Just as I was assuming' - Indicates shift in focus from waiting for race to race itself.
Paragraph 5 - the long complex senteces in this pargraph reflects the hectic scene.
STRUCTURALLY- The combination of the 3 races (the donkey race, the spectator race and Yaqoob's race to get Levine in front), reflects the complexity of the events being described!
Furthermore- notice 'perched' is used for all 3 races. Levine perched. Jockeys perched. and the spectators perched.
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