- Created by: Jess Holland
- Created on: 15-05-11 12:01
BA scraps its sandwiches in hunger for savings
Paragraph 1- Its a factual opening: The loss-making. Monday. £22 million a year.
Paragraph 2- BA (british airways) is not a budget line so people fly with them if they ae willing to spend a little bit more money.
Paragraph 3- The " and " states that it is a quotation and it is the 'Chief Executive' which makes us belive it is a true quotation as it is an authoritative opinion.
Paragraph 4- Has facts in it '£401 million last year'. 'Casualties' we occisiate with pain. 'Humble cheese sandwich' Not really a big deal and its emotive laungage.
Paragrah 5- 'Ban' Danger and dramatic.