'Bent double, like old beggars undersack'
Simile creates the image a dirty and tired men rather than a heroic soldier
'Men marched asleep.Many had lost their boots'
The consonnance creats a rhythm like marching and shows that it is drilled into them so much they march in their sleep showing they are overworked
'thick green light/ As under a gree sea'
repetiton of green suggets being sick and that the image of the gas attack is engrained in his mind
'Obscene as cancer'
Simile makes war which is unknow to most people into something more relatable and suggets it happens to innpcent people
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