'I come' - Written in present tense. Creates a sense of immediacy, helps reader to imagine experience.
'you can imagine using it to climb up the inside of a chimney' - direct address is used to help reader to imagine situation more vividly by comparing with a chimeny - something that is familiar to the reader.
'scraping quake' - Descriptive- imagery used. 'scraping' evokes the sound made by rock as it shifts. 'quake' describes vibration it produces.
'round rocks below' - Alliteration of 'r' sound to emphasise speed and smoothness of movement.
'Fear shoots my hands over my head.' short sentence, direct- and personification of fear used to emphasise how Ralston is no longer in control of his own actions. His hands work independently of him and are driven by fear and not rational decisions.
'Then silence' - Minor sentence suggesting how the incident stops as quickly and abruptly as it happened.
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