Semantic Fields:
Routine, order and boredom - 'Assemble' The mothers are like soldiers. 'Skilled trades' the fathers lives are at work. 'School' the new generation are in school where they will be taugh to do what their parents did.
Sibilance - 'Swing and sandpit' makes fun things sound ordered and regimented
Nature- 'Wind/ is ruining their courting places' wid adds life and chaos which is seen as inconvineent. 'Unripe acorns' the children haven't yet reached the same fate as their parents
Age and Time - 'young mothers' 'lovers' 'children' The three stages of their lives are represented by nature
Space - 'Border' nature (like their dreams) are kept away. 'Behind' and ' before' the women are trapped between husband and children
Repetiton - 'Still courting places ' the romance has ended. 'Something is pushing them/to the side of their own lives' Enjambment emphasises separation
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