Psychology AS - PYA2 - Stress: Exam Answer

A great way of revising is to mark somebody else's essay - attached is an answer that I wrote, but, looking at the mark scheme, my answers are terrible! Lol!! However, I am tired... and I don't have to heart to mark myself so low, so you guys can do it for me :] pretty please?

I answered question 2 - the link for the AQA mark scheme is below - thank youuu :]]]