Would this be a good answer to a section B 16 mark question?

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Dear …

I’m going to the sea side during the summer holidays! Would you like to join me? We could visit the seaside shops, build sand castles, jump waves, play games, sun bathe and bathe in the sea.

    I love the sea side. It’s my special place. A place where I can forget all of my worries. A place where I can relax. A place which I think is the most special place in the world.

    Imagine the green sea reaching up to meet the blue sky, eventually being reunited at the horizon. Pebbles, sea shells and seaweed, draped over the dessert of golden sand, slowly being eaten up and replenished as the tide comes in and goes out twice each day.

    Imagine the creatures. Wild birds fish, crustaceans and molluscs, occasionally hampered by domesticated horses and dogs. Wild meets domestic yet they meet in harmony. A gallop through the sea hurts no one.

    Imagine the swarms of people. Children making sandcastles with a bucket and spade before filling the moat with water, which seamlessly disappears before their very eyes, jumping waves, trying to predict when the next one in scheduled to arrive and playing games with friends. Meanwhile, their dads and mums, grandpas and grandmas sun bathe on the sea shore and bathe in the sea.

        I love the sea side. It’s my special place. A place where I can forget all of my worries. A place where I can relax. A place which I think is the most special place in the world. Are you going to come then, come to my special place? Please let me know as soon as possible.

Best wishes

Hannah

Posted Sat 24th March, 2012 @ 12:22 by Hannah