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Help!

I'm the worst poet in the world and have to write a poem about love for friday! :/

It's got to be how love is like a CD/ DVD/ CD ROM etc...

Preferaly in the style of Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy but not neccessarily :)

Any ideas? :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:05 by Leah

Each tyme i play yuee i fall in luv wid yuee all over agen < LOOOOL X___X (soz)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:12 by в

Hey, it's good! Keep it coming!

I'v done alot worse! :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:13 by Leah

Lool minez swdns rubbish andd well, rongg if yuee think daah waay lol

Posted: 26-06-12 19:14 by в

hmmm... can you post the carol ann duffy one?

Posted: 26-06-12 19:14 by Neon

Leah wrote:

Help!

I'm the worst poet in the world and have to write a poem about love for friday! :/

It's got to be how love is like a CD/ DVD/ CD ROM etc...

Preferaly in the style of Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy but not neccessarily :)

Any ideas? :)

a CD ROM?.....what do you mean by that?

Posted: 26-06-12 19:16 by ELectrica!

Leah Summers wrote:

a CD ROM?.....what do you mean by that?

it's like a CD basically, only for computers I THINK :P

Posted: 26-06-12 19:18 by Neon

luna venatrix wrote:

hmmm... can you post the carol ann duffy one?

 Yep... one mo... :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:20 by Leah

and then I'll see what I can do re-modelling it :D

Posted: 26-06-12 19:22 by Neon

  Valentine by Carol Ann Duffy Not a red rose or a satin heart.

I give you an onion.
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper.
It promises light
like the careful ********** of love.

Here.
It will blind you with tears
like a lover.
It will make your reflection
a wobbling photo of grief.

I am trying to be truthful.

Not a cute card or a kissogram.

I give you an onion.
Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips,
possessive and faithful
as we are,
for as long as we are.

Take it.
Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring,
if you like.

Lethal.
Its scent will cling to your fingers,
cling to your knife.

Posted: 26-06-12 19:24 by Leah

Comment on how CDs go round and round with no slef control. and relate that to some lovey dovey bullshizzle maybe. I dunno

Posted: 26-06-12 19:24 by Blitzcrank

It's very strange!

You don't have to make it too long :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:24 by Leah

luna venatrix wrote:

Leah Summers wrote:

a CD ROM?.....what do you mean by that?

it's like a CD basically, only for computers I THINK :P

oh, ok....

 you could say that your love is endless/eternity just like how you play a CD and you dont wanna stop the music as you are that emotionally attached to it

...im not very good at romanticism

Posted: 26-06-12 19:28 by ELectrica!

Join the club hun!

you lot come up with amazing ideas! Brill! :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:31 by Leah

uuuurgh.... I wrote out a whole load, but it didn't go through! -.- bear with me whilst I re-type it

Posted: 26-06-12 19:35 by Neon

Thanks hunnie - i'm really appriciative! :)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:36 by Leah

thanks

Posted: 26-06-12 19:48 by ELectrica!

x)

Posted: 26-06-12 19:49 by Leah

I offer you a disk.
It is treasure trove.
It promises a melody
like the singing of two hearts.

Careful.
it’s fragile
like a heart.
It will shatter if you break it.
and show your face fragmented

I’m just telling you the truth

Not a flower, it’s too fragrant,

I offer you this disk
if you break it, it will shatter
and it’s shards will pierce you
like a broken heart
and sting long after it’s withdrawn.

Do not refuse.
It will spin for you,
just as I complete your will.

Dangerous.
It’s shards will cut you,
if you break it

Posted: 26-06-12 19:52 by Neon

just like... as ideas... I find it easier to kind of put them straight into something

Posted: 26-06-12 19:53 by Neon

I love you sooo much Luna :)

Thanks... i now owe you forever and am sending you a hug...

* sends hug to luna venatrix *

Thank you soooooo much, i'm truly grateful :D

Posted: 26-06-12 19:57 by Leah

hugs back yay :) :D you're welcome :)

Posted: 27-06-12 12:18 by Neon