poetry war, anyone? :)

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I know probably no one is interested in this,

but I assure you rhyming is simply bliss!

The concept of it is simple you see,

in rhyming couplets reply to me.

Say what it is you wish to say,

we can rhyme in this manner the entire day.

So to help the conversation begin, a question:

how do you peoples cope with rejection?

Posted: 10-06-12 17:01 by Neon

Impulse, stop wasting your time and REVISE, WOMAN!!!!!!!!!! XD

SAVE THE POETRY FOR AFTER YOUR EXAMS!!!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:04 by Re-Re

there is no place for revision in my heart!

I am fully consumed by the rhyming art!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:10 by Neon

Come on Impulse, get your head in a book

Or in your exam you're gonna think f......! 

:)

Modified once, last modified by Dilly on Sun 10th June, 2012 @ 17:15

Posted: 10-06-12 17:15 by Dilly

yes, but my exam is then, not now...

you tell me to focus, but I ask you: HOW?

Posted: 10-06-12 17:16 by Neon

YOU GUYS ARE FREAKS! lmfaoooooo

Posted: 10-06-12 17:16 by Re-Re

Impulse wrote:

yes, but my exam is then, not now...

you tell me to focus, but I ask you: HOW?

That is the question that no one can answer!!!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:17 by Dilly

Re-Re wrote:

YOU GUYS ARE FREAKS! lmfaoooooo

I am a freak, that may be so,

but when it comes to rhyming there's much I know.

by judging my poems steady stream, 

I know far more than you it seems :)

Posted: 10-06-12 17:19 by Neon

Dilly wrote:

That is the question that no one can answer!!!

Indeed! an age old conundrum I face...

I'm rather run the rhyming race :P

Posted: 10-06-12 17:20 by Neon

Open your eyes and have a look,

Turn your computer off and open a book!

Oh no, this make me a freak too... XD

Posted: 10-06-12 17:20 by Re-Re

Re-Re wrote:

Open your eyes and have a look,

Turn your computer off and open a book!

Oh no, this make me a freak too... XD

Lol!!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:22 by Dilly

Re-Re wrote:

Open your eyes and have a look,

Turn your computer off and open a book!

Oh no, this make me a freak too... XD

but the internet is my only friend...

to close down my computer I do not intend!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:22 by Neon

By the way Impulse, you are really good at rhyming!!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:23 by Dilly

Impulse Impulse where to start

your lyrics have me laughing at my heart

Impulse Impulse dont you see

Look quickly there's a bee

Posted: 10-06-12 17:25 by NoirRose

why thank you, dear dilly-

but anyone can rhyme, so don't be silly :)

when you are try, you can rhyme too!

typing words is all you have to do!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:26 by Neon

Rosa D wrote:

Impulse Impulse where to start

your lyrics have me laughing at my heart

Impulse Impulse dont you see

Look quickly there's a bee

This is a bit random...but it rhymes!! :D

Posted: 10-06-12 17:26 by Dilly

THERES A BEE? WHERE?!?!?!?!

lol, way to ruin the rhyming flow... =P

Posted: 10-06-12 17:28 by Re-Re

a bee? hooray!

what a brilliant day!

where there's a bee there's a flower, my mother tells me

so now we've a bee, let's search for those flowers, quickly!

Posted: 10-06-12 17:29 by Neon

Window now don't be slow

before it starts to cry tears of snow

Posted: 10-06-12 17:30 by NoirRose

snow is so pretty!

so oh what a pity!

that forcing those tears would be so cruel...

and to anger a bee, I would be a fool

Posted: 10-06-12 17:34 by Neon

It would defiantly sting alright 

All the way through the dark black night

Posted: 10-06-12 17:35 by NoirRose

a night so black, that the stars would hide, 

in a blanket of cloud, and we'd think they'd died

Posted: 10-06-12 17:37 by Neon

Oh my god that is amzing i give UP

Thats fine now wait i must grab a cup

at oh its started i just cant stop

When will my bubble finally go pop

this is strange and a tad bit weird

and also ive started to grow a small beard

ha thats a joke but this aint funny

i should get paid some good old money

Modified once, last modified by NoirRose on Sun 10th June, 2012 @ 17:41

Posted: 10-06-12 17:41 by NoirRose

now maybe I should shut my trap

'cause this is less a poem and more a rap...

Posted: 10-06-12 17:45 by Neon