My teachers keep telling me that my introductions and conclusions need work but they dont tell me where i am specifically going wrong. Can someone please tell me how they right good introductions and conclusions.
introductions basically introduce what the essay is going to be about, so give a bit of history, but dont make it too long!!!! just a brief view of it. and the conclusion you need to go back and answer the question/title. this allows you to sum up all of the evidence and points you have made in your essay :)