Feedback on coursework?

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Hi all, for my media coursework, me and some friends produced the opening sequence to a film, could you please give us some feedback about what you like, and what could be improved...it helps with our evaluation :)

Thanks!
Here's the link -  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LA9-nNbmiE

Posted: 01-05-12 18:35 by Beth

Some of the camera shots are slightly shaky, I would also suggest not having the titles on a black screen, maybe just have them come up as the sequence is playing

Posted: 06-05-12 16:54 by Lizzie Harrison

Thank You :) 

Posted: 14-05-12 12:54 by Beth