can some one edit my introductory parragraph

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please can someone edit my introductory paragraph for a journey in Venice:

I have always wanted to visit the sinking city of Italy since I was little because I have always recognized Italy as the extraordinary, famous ‘boot shaped country’ in Europe.

can i have some tips too?

thanks it would be a great help if you could :)

Posted Wed 21st March, 2012 @ 18:35 by saraaax

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From a very young age, I have always coveted the gorgeous sights of the "sinking city" of Italy - the famous "boot-shaped" country of Europe. 

Answered Thu 22nd March, 2012 @ 22:32 by Muhammed Jarir Kanji