Remains
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- Created on: 27-04-18 20:27
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- Remains
- Simon Armitage
- English poet, playwright and novelist
- He worked as a probation officer for six years before focusing on poetry
- Structure & Form
- The title is ambiguous
- remains of a dead man
- remains of the memory
- the remains left of his own life
- no regular line length or rhyme scheme
- sounds like someone telling a story naturally
- Stanzas
- second half describe the after effects of it on the speaker
- voice shifts from first person plural "we" to first person singular "I"
- he feels personally responsible
- last line "my"
- The title is ambiguous
- Reality of Conflict
- Graphic imagery
- Violent metaphor
- "it rips through his life"
- "I see broad daylight on the other side"
- Violent metaphor
- Graphic imagery
- Memory
- Repetition of line 4
- "probably armed, possibly not"
- hes replaying it in his mind
- "probably armed, possibly not"
- monosyllabic punchline openings of "sleep" and "dream"
- imitate loud, violent sounds of bullet shots
- reflects how he's jolted awake by his memories
- imitate loud, violent sounds of bullet shots
- Metaphor
- a soldier "dug in behind enemy lines"
- the memory is tucked in his mind
- the memory is dangerous
- it has the potential to destroy him
- a soldier "dug in behind enemy lines"
- leads to guilt
- joint enterprise
- there were others involved
- "all three of us open fire"
- keen for the reader to know it wasn't just him
- he feels guilty
- keen for the reader to know it wasn't just him
- "his bloody life in my blood hands"
- reference to Macbeth
- guilt is driving him mad
- reference to Macbeth
- joint enterprise
- Repetition of line 4
- Simon Armitage
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