Creative Writing Story
- Created by: Tony Chen 12
- Created on: 05-03-15 20:38
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- Lost Abroad
- Feelings
- I was very frightened when I was lost in the Supermarket
- Did not know what to do
- Emotions
- Taste
- First real taste of traditional Chinese food
- Sight
- I was happy to see the familiar faces of my grandparents
- Hear
- Could not understand the mysterious Chinese Language
- Touch
- the warmth of the chinese polluted air touching my skin
- Smell
- The aroma of Chinese traditional food
- The choking smell of the polluted Chinese air
- Very shocked as the difference between the United Kingdom and China were significant
- the warmth of the chinese polluted air touching my skin
- Very shocked as the difference between the United Kingdom and China were significant
- Could not make sense of the funny smells when I was lost in the supermarket.
- Taste
- Plot
- First trip to China
- I was only seven years old
- First real taste of traditional Chinese food
- First time I had properly seen my grandparents
- Near the end of the story I had got lost in a Chinese Supermarket
- Without the capability of speaking Chinese
- Made me feel powerless
- I thought same other person wearing the same clothes were my parents
- Parents were so busy in trying to catch the flight back to London
- I was very distraught to see that they were not my parents
- I cried very loudly and everyone had turned their eyes to me. The couple I was following me led me to reception
- was attracted to a toy
- Without the capability of speaking Chinese
- I was only seven years old
- First few days went quiet well meet all my relatives
- First trip to China
- Feelings
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