Discovery
- Created by: holly pumphrey
- Created on: 19-03-21 12:03
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- Discovery
- Introduction
- Setting: Khatija's house, kitchen
- Smell: food, pasta, garlic,
- Taste:
- See: pasta being made, mum, safe near washing machine
- Hear: gas, metal pans, flowing water, oven
- Touch: feel cold (drink), heat on face
- Smell: food, pasta, garlic,
- Thirsty / hungry so goes downstairs
- Imagery, onomatopoeia, similes, emotive language
- Setting: Khatija's house, kitchen
- Paragraph 1
- First notice the safe
- "What's going on?"
- Speech marks, question marks, hyphen, exclamation mark, foreshadowing
- Paragraph 2
- "What's inside the safe?"
- confusion, curiosity,
- Mum says "no"
- betrayal,
- Guilt trip, flattery
- rhetorical question, speech, speech marks, alliteration, hyperbole
- "What's inside the safe?"
- Paragraph 3
- Mum leaves kitchen
- Search for key but cannot find it
- Curiosity,
- Cliche, varied sentence structures, sibilance, parenthesis, brackets
- Paragraph 4
- Key is found but on high surface
- Excitement, joy, accomplishment
- disappointment, stressed, race against time
- Medicine cabinet: locked, "tall as a mountain"
- Use stool to reach key
- Over the moon
- Stool: breakfast stool, silver metal frame, blue satin pillow, high up for little children
- Simile, personification, flashback, colon
- Key is found but on high surface
- Paragraph 5
- Open safe
- "Pasta floods out of the safe"
- quickly, swimming pool of pasta, drowning in pasta
- very confused, humorous, surprise,
- Exaggeration, hyperbole, imagery, ..., semi-colon
- Little did she know what was about to happen - she messed with the wrong person
- Introduction
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