Autotrophic

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  • Autotrophic
    • Setting
      • Autistic woman - Claire develops a relationship with a highly educated solicitor
    • Opening / Chapter 1
      • Then dialogue of Claire bumping into solicitors brothers - dropping coffee all over herself  (She had a crush on solicitor at school and was close  friends with his brother)
        • She becomes shocked and mumbles a greeting - he looks similar in features and she gets all flustered - hasn't seen him since school - she had a major crush that kind of faded
      • Start with her walking down to the coffee shop - quite anxious (feels shy and uncomfortable around others) as it is for her friend - she is on a lunchbreak she is psychologist working in the private sector
        • Then dialogue of Claire bumping into solicitors brothers - dropping coffee all over herself  (She had a crush on solicitor at school and was close  friends with his brother)
          • She becomes shocked and mumbles a greeting - he looks similar in features and she gets all flustered - hasn't seen him since school - she had a major crush that kind of faded
      • He apologises and greets her - talk about how life it and invites her to his birthday meal at a posh restaurant with his family present - the next day
        • She agrees hesitantly and he starts talking about his brother - how he's a solicitor and how much of a ***** he is (jokingly) - says he has a girlfriend - Claire starts to feel down and she says she has to go
          • Walks back to work feeling quite jealous - friend asks her what's wrong and she dismisses it as nothing important- work day ends and her friend drops her back at home
            • She looks at the photos of her family and gets stressed - explain why they have always not been supportive and her dad being a drug addict and alcoholic - traumatises her relationships - mother is lovely and supportive
              • Decides she isn't hungry and gets ready for bed making sure she gets a new towel - does it when she always washes her hair - finds a piece of paper in her blazer + it has his brothers mobile an phone number on it - she smiles and goes to sleep dreaming of him...
    • Chapter 2
      • Gets up in the morning - feeling happy - goes to coffee shop and bumps into him. He looks quite angry at her and shoves past her. - feels rejected and somewhat annoyed because who does he think he is.
        • Goes to work in a bad mood and her friend takes her out to a club - she gets hammered and he's there with his friends - sees Claire and tries to take her home - Claire shocked at how nice he is
          • Day of the brothers birthday meal - he doesn't know that Claire is invited - Claire invites Charlotte around to help her pick her clothes and she feels really anxious and doesn't want to go
            • Rebecca persuades her to go and she goes to the restaurant - she looks out of place - he hasn't arrived yet - his brother greets her and she sits down - he then arrives and he has his girlfriend who is stuck up but very pretty- Claire compares herself to her
              • He looks surprised and turns into being quite annoyed with his brother - gives him death glares across the table- his girlfriend doesn't like Claire + asks her what her job is (she's a midwife) - she's surprised and he smirks at Claire
                • His girlfriend keeps on insulting her + Claire is quite quiet + looks down at her lap - the meal then comes and she takes out her hand sanitizer + his girlfriend laughs - he glares at her + she refrains - he watches Claire eat her meal + she goes around in an order - he smiles softly- thinks it's cute
                  • Claire is oblivious and thinks he doesn't like her in reality, he does - His brother does a toast + says Happy birthday to him. - Claire is surprised + it doesn't go unnoticed - she starts thinking about why his brother invited her

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